tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2525821381928899734.post1395768288072738224..comments2017-04-26T07:11:36.913-06:00Comments on The Snow Leopard: The Query SharkElizabeth Haysmonthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01167517867828909705noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2525821381928899734.post-32711850396008307022010-05-03T17:40:11.247-06:002010-05-03T17:40:11.247-06:00One of the best sources I've seen put it this ...One of the best sources I've seen put it this way:<br />First paragraph:<br />(begin with name of protag) is a ____ who ____. (then write several sentences describing something of the character's background and current world, introducing us to her/him.)<br /><br />Paragraph 2:<br />Suddenly, (or) But when, (then fill in the major turning point that leads to the confrontation)<br /><br />Paragraph 3: <br />Begin this sentence with 'Now' and make it an action sentence. <br /><br />In the first three paragraph, the word count should stay under 200 or 250 tops.<br /><br />This exercise cleared it all up for me and I received 4 requests for more material within two weeks :)Huntresshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08155372788872245758noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2525821381928899734.post-86438981908243018242010-05-02T13:11:37.816-06:002010-05-02T13:11:37.816-06:00I love The Query Shark. I always recommend it to w...I love The Query Shark. I always recommend it to writers who are querying! It's such a great resource.Talli Rolandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04780882465745107715noreply@blogger.com